In the knot
I woke up one rainy morn
To discover that I am married
I didn’t plan for it
Neither was I ready to wheel its chariot
But I took a dive
The race of life is unending
Whether you choose to run or a spectator
For sure, the run you must partake
To be a victim or a victor
The race is inevitable
Sit on the fence, never an option
The peaceful battle must yet be fought
Wounded or broken, you must strive to win
Or take a defeated journey beyond the seven seas
How did I get here?
It all started with a whisper
Loud enough to break the eardrum
Then the web of passion encapsulate me
Led me to the gallow, a sheep for the slaughter
Hand stains, mouth stains
Can’t deny the meal
Eaten to satisfaction or not
But here I am
Loop in the knot
Life did plan for me
What I didn’t plan for myself
I must plan to have the world else the world has me.
ANALYSIS
THEMATIC ANALYSIS
The poem opens up with a thought by the poet persona who was astonished to find himself where he had not imagined. It likened the situation to someone who is married even though he had not plan to get married.
He sees himself as not being ready to take such big step but has drifted into the world of marital realities.
He likened the world to a race, a track event where both the athlete and the spectators all run the race. He noted that both the winner or loser all run the race together. This underscores the fact that in life, it is either you pursue something or something pursues you. You must run.
He uses an oxymoron to illustrate that the battle of life is not one fought with weapons of mass destruction but involves mental battles coupled with physical effort to win whether one is hurt or dejected.
The poet persona returned to himself questioning how he got to the point in his life as he found himself where he never envisaged. He conceded that he must have listened to his passion or appetite to taste or undertake what was enticing to him but not expedient.
He had been lured into doing things for instant pleasure ignoring the future consequences or effects of his actions.
Whether he had justify the pains he goes through is immaterial. He is now facing the realities of his actions.
In closing he realized that life does not harbour a vacuum. If a man fails to plan his life, life will plan his life for him. If he consciously plans his life, he will decide what happens to him but if he allows life plan his life for him, then he will lose control of the major incidents in his life.
FIGURES OF SPEECH:
METAPHOR:
Neither was I ready to wheel its chariot
But I took a dive
The race of life is unending
Sit on the fence
Or take a defeated journey beyond the seven seas
Can’t deny the meal
Loop in the knot
OXYMORON
The peaceful battle must yet be fought
RHETORICAL QUESTIONS
How did I get here?
PARADOX
It all started with a whisper
Loud enough to break the eardrum
PERSONIFICATION
Then the web of passion encapsulate me
Led me to the gallow, a sheep for the slaughter
Life did plan for me
I must plan to have the world else the world has me.
ANTITHESIS
Hand stains, mouth stains